Map and theme: Harbour Heaven

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Kakcoo
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This is highly work in progress, but I thought I'd post it here to get some feedback. This is supposed to be a shoppa map. The terrain is indistructible and you'll need rope to get around. I've used masks to get some depht and the feel of being inside the various tunnels, pipes and buildings. I think I'll add a crane, some more platforms and some more details here and there. The mountains on the right side are not shaded nor outlined yet.

I've used the starfield background from the DeapSpace theme as a layer in my background. I hope that is okay. I'll make my own starfield if not.

Any comments will be highly apreciated. Smile

Screenshots:




More (and larger) screenshots:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_015.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_016.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_017.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_018.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_019.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_020.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_021.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_022.png
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http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_024.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_025.png

Map PNG:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map.png
Mask PNG:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/mask.png

With reduced quality:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_012.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_013.png
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/Bilder/random/hedgewars/map_014.png

Download Map and theme:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23015/div/annet/Harbour_Heaven_WIP.zip

nemo
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Well, I've commented in IRC before, but, since you invited it here.
I like it, I even like the rainbow sky effect.
I think the line style is well in keeping w/ hedgewars style guidelines too.
I do like the playing with mask, I just think you should make clearer (darkening or fuzzing) which parts of scenery are background where it isn't obvious. In particular I'm thinking of the brown land around the rocks.

Oh, and maybe make some parts of the map destructible. Like the toilet.

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son, i am not disappoint.

Good work.

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Awesome, good way to make a first impression! Big Grin


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nemo wrote:

Well, I've commented in IRC before, but, since you invited it here.
I like it, I even like the rainbow sky effect.
I think the line style is well in keeping w/ hedgewars style guidelines too.
I do like the playing with mask, I just think you should make clearer (darkening or fuzzing) which parts of scenery are background where it isn't obvious. In particular I'm thinking of the brown land around the rocks.

Oh, and maybe make some parts of the map destructible. Like the toilet.


Thanks. Smile

I've tried making the background darker. Both completely black (a silhouette), and very dark brown. I think very dark brown worked best. Smile

Maybe I should make the skies darker?


FireFox wrote:

son, i am not disappoint.

Good work.


Thank you.

Star and Moon wrote:

Awesome, good way to make a first impression! Big Grin

Thanks. I apreciate you saying that. Smile

PS: Forgot to mention that the preview-image for the map is all wrong.

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I think both black and dark brown aren't as good as the first picture.
Beautiful theme regardless.~

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Really cool!

I like the "toilet tunnel" Big Grin

I also think that the first background was the best one.
I my opinion it should not be darker than the stones in the real background image (far away).

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For people opposed to darkening, I hope you try playing it first.

Not knowing what to rope on can be a problem.
Is why the background textures added to maps were darkened before release. (the ones added by Smaxx, that outline an explosion)
Considered fuzzing 'em too, but didn't look good.

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Awesome!

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This is one of the best maps ever!
I noticed that your preview was all wrong, so I fixed it for you.

T


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I love it! Good work and the little boat is too cute. It looks like it will be a good shoppa map.

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Hey, that looks REALLY good. It keeps to the guidelines and looks polished to. I know I could never make something like that Wink Smiley

You should go work on the art side of things with Tiy.

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I love this map!
How did you make the unsolid foreground?
Have you made any other maps?

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The map's using a mask similar to the default Basketball map. This allows you to define non collision (= air), solid ground and indestructible areas.

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Smaxx wrote:

The map's using a mask similar to the default Basketball map. This allows you to define non collision (= air), solid ground and indestructible areas.

Ah, I see. THanks Smile

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Smaxx wrote:

The map's using a mask similar to the default Basketball map. This allows you to define non collision (= air), solid ground and indestructible areas.

Thanks, I get it now. Smile now I can have lots of fun!

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Oh man! Shocking
Awesome!!
As Star and Moon said, one of the best maps ever!
Good work! Big Grin

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Smaxx wrote:

The map's using a mask similar to the default Basketball map. This allows you to define non collision (= air), solid ground and indestructible areas.

I see mask.png but don't really see how it works.

Nice looking map BTW. Will try when I get home and look at what you have in there to figure out this "mask.png/ =air" thing.

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Nevermind, I totally get it now. When Mask.png is present walkable surfaces are defined my mask not map.

Nemo told me, and it's true. If the mask is red it is not detructible, if it's white it is. They can be mixed too.

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Wow what a map what a theme..
I wish everyone wud be intrested in mine like youres..Big Grin

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Quote:
I wish everyone wud be intrested in mine like youres..

You know what to do now... Smile

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Are you planning to make more changes to this map, like adding detail to the upper right rocks?

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Brilliant work. Smile

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-not in .14??????
why??????

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Thomas wrote:

-not in .14??????
why??????

It's not done yet. Sad Smiley It might be in 9.15 though.


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For the record, Mask: Transparent = Air, White = Breakable, Red = Solid :3

Also, I want this map to be finished D: all that pure grey land on the right side is killing my mood xD Also... it would be nice if the game had an option where we could make an actual "background" picture, that wouldn't be like the sky feature, but actually fit the regular picture. For example, you break one of the houses, and below the regular land, there's another picture of the inside of the place.

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You can set that in the theme. Its called "landbacktex.png" or something.

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Yeah, but it only works for randomly generated maps. It doesn't work for regular maps that work off a theme

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Yes, and if you dont post it into a feature- wishlist there will never be a feature like thisWink Smiley

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Like for the google summer of code.
EDIT: Also if you have given up on this I would like to finish it Kackoo.

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